diff --git a/ghost/admin/app/templates/explore.hbs b/ghost/admin/app/templates/explore.hbs
index 28bbeafb99..122f810142 100644
--- a/ghost/admin/app/templates/explore.hbs
+++ b/ghost/admin/app/templates/explore.hbs
@@ -15,15 +15,15 @@
         <div class="explore-permissions">
             <div>
                 <span>{{svg-jar "check-circle" class="w6 v-mid" alt="checkmark"}}</span>
-                <p>Give read-only access to your site to create the Explore directory posting.</p>
+                <p>Allow read-only access to your site data to create a directory listing.</p>
             </div>
             <div>
                 <span>{{svg-jar "check-circle" class="w6 v-mid" alt="checkmark"}}</span>
-                <p>You will be able to choose what data is publicly visible or hidden.</p>
+                <p>You’ll be able to choose what data is shown publicly or hidden.</p>
             </div>
             <div>
                 <span>{{svg-jar "check-circle" class="w6 v-mid" alt="checkmark"}}</span>
-                <p>Your site will be ranked and promoted across the entire Ghost ecosystem.</p>
+                <p>Your site will be promoted across the entire Ghost ecosystem.</p>
             </div>
         </div>