on master help sign in
use galen's copy suggestions
commit39e577065ca7ecd86c460f2ba1f750de6c3bce7d authorAnthony Arroyo <anthony@tlon.io> dateWed 18 Sep 2019, 16:25 (7 years ago) parent207376e
1 file changed+10−5
src/components/Greeting.js+10−5
src/components/Greeting.js+10−5
@@ -33,10 +33,15 @@ export default function ActivateDisclaimer({ point }) {
3333 </Text>
3434
3535 <Text className={cn(TEXT_STYLE, 'block mb2')}>
36− As of this very moment, you own an Urbit identity – a digital
37− identity that you can keep for the rest of your life. Use the Master
38− Ticket included in your Passport to access your Urbit identity at
39− any time. Right now you can:
36+ As of this moment, you own a piece of Urbit. No one can take it from
37+ you, and you can keep it for the rest of your life.
38+ </Text>
39+ <Text className={cn(TEXT_STYLE, 'block mb2')}>
40+ Keep your Master Ticket safe. No one can recover it for you. But it
41+ can get you back into Urbit at any time.
42+ </Text>
43+ <Text className={cn(TEXT_STYLE, 'block mb2')}>
44+ Right now you can:
4045 </Text>
4146 </Grid.Item>
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@@ -57,7 +62,7 @@ export default function ActivateDisclaimer({ point }) {
5762 as={LinkButton}
5863 href="https://urbit.org/docs/getting-started/">
5964 <Text className={cn(TEXT_STYLE, 'block mb2')}>
60− Boot your computer
65+ Boot Arvo, the Urbit OS
6166 </Text>
6267 </Grid.Item>
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