on master help sign in
Merge pull request #285 from urbit/galen-copy
c566a07Anthony Arroyo
src/components/Greeting.js+10−5
@@ -33,10 +33,15 @@ export default function ActivateDisclaimer({ point }) {
33 </Text>
33 </Text>
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35 <Text className={cn(TEXT_STYLE, 'block mb2')}>
35 <Text className={cn(TEXT_STYLE, 'block mb2')}>
36− As of this very moment, you own an Urbit identity – a digital
36+ As of this moment, you own a piece of Urbit. No one can take it from
37− identity that you can keep for the rest of your life. Use the Master
37+ you, and you can keep it for the rest of your life.
38− Ticket included in your Passport to access your Urbit identity at
38+ </Text>
39+ <Text className={cn(TEXT_STYLE, 'block mb2')}>
40+ Keep your Master Ticket safe. No one can recover it for you. But it
41+ can get you back into Urbit at any time.
42+ </Text>
43+ <Text className={cn(TEXT_STYLE, 'block mb2')}>
39− any time. Right now you can:
44+ Right now you can:
40 </Text>
45 </Text>
41 </Grid.Item>
46 </Grid.Item>
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@@ -57,7 +62,7 @@ export default function ActivateDisclaimer({ point }) {
57 as={LinkButton}
62 as={LinkButton}
58 href="https://urbit.org/docs/getting-started/">
63 href="https://urbit.org/docs/getting-started/">
59 <Text className={cn(TEXT_STYLE, 'block mb2')}>
64 <Text className={cn(TEXT_STYLE, 'block mb2')}>
60− Boot your computer
65+ Boot Arvo, the Urbit OS
61 </Text>
66 </Text>
62 </Grid.Item>
67 </Grid.Item>
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