diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/from_md/release-notes/rl-2211.section.xml b/nixos/doc/manual/from_md/release-notes/rl-2211.section.xml
index 6a4573f6711f..32db72f3b13e 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/from_md/release-notes/rl-2211.section.xml
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/from_md/release-notes/rl-2211.section.xml
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
   <title>Release 22.11 (“Raccoon”, 2022.11/30)</title>
   <para>
     The NixOS release team is happy to announce a new version of NixOS
-    22.11. NixOS is both a Linux distribution, and a set of packages
-    usable on other Linux systems and macOS.
+    22.11. NixOS is a Linux distribution, whose set of packages can also
+    be used on other Linux systems and macOS.
   </para>
   <para>
     This release is supported until the end of June 2023, handing over
diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2211.section.md b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2211.section.md
index aedc3c7831c1..5ab7038cae3a 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2211.section.md
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2211.section.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # Release 22.11 (“Raccoon”, 2022.11/30) {#sec-release-22.11}
 
-The NixOS release team is happy to announce a new version of NixOS 22.11. NixOS is both a Linux distribution, and a set of packages usable on other Linux systems and macOS.
+The NixOS release team is happy to announce a new version of NixOS 22.11. NixOS is a Linux distribution, whose set of packages can also be used on other Linux systems and macOS.
 
 This release is supported until the end of June 2023, handing over to NixOS 23.05.