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44<section class="full lh-copy c2-7-md c3-7-lg mt4">
44<section class="full lh-copy c2-7-md c3-7-lg mt4">
45− <p class="mb4">
46− Urbit is two new pieces of technology:<br/>
47− Urbit OS + Urbit ID.
48− </p>
49− <p><strong>Urbit OS</strong> is a clean slate reimagining of the operating system as an 'overlay OS'. It runs on any Unix machine with an internet connection. Urbit OS is a compact system for an individual to run their own permanent personal server.</p>
45+ <p><strong>Urbit OS</strong> is a clean slate reimagining of the operating system as an 'overlay OS.' It runs on any Unix machine with an internet connection.</p>
46+ <p>It's a compact system for an individual to run their own permanent personal server.</p>
50 <p><strong>Urbit ID</strong> is a decentralized digital identity system. Your
47 <p><strong>Urbit ID</strong> is a decentralized digital identity system. Your
51− Urbit ID is a username, network address and crypto wallet designed for Urbit OS.</p>
48+ Urbit ID is a username, network address, and crypto wallet.</p>
52− <p>Urbit OS + Urbit ID are designed to work together as a single system. Both are completely <a href="https://github.com/urbit/urbit">open source</a> for anyone to build on top of, play with and experiment with.</p>
49+ <p>Both are designed to work together as a single system, completely <a class="b--black bb" href="https://github.com/urbit/urbit">open source</a>.</p>
53− <ul class="list">
50+ <ul class="list mt4">
54 <li class="mt3">
51 <li class="mt3">
55 <a class="b--blue2 blue2 bb" href="/using/install/">Install + Setup</a>
52 <a class="b--blue2 blue2 bb" href="/using/install/">Install + Setup</a>
56 </li>
53 </li>
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