@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ and [Jael](@/docs/arvo/jael/jael-api.md) to ensure that communication between
1414ships is always done with the most recent set of networking keys, and that
1515networking state is appropriately reset when a breach has occurred.
1616
17−Before it has been spawned, every ship begin with a `life` and `rift` of 0. For
17+Every ship begins with a `life` and `rift` of 0. For
1818galaxies, stars, and planets, these values are stored in the Azimuth PKI, while
1919for moons, these values are stored by their parent. Comets cannot change their
2020networking keys, nor can they breach, and so their `life` and `rift` are always 0.