@@ -519,17 +519,15 @@ where they are associated with the actual `blob:clay`, and as the values in
519519 [%direct p=lobe q=page] :: immediate
520520```
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522−This is a node of data. In every case, `p` is the hash of the blob.
522+This is a node of data. In both cases, `p` is the hash of the blob.
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524−`%delta` is the case where we define the data by a delta on other data.
525−In practice, the other data is always the previous commit, but nothing
526−depends on this. `p` is the hash of the new blob, `q.q` is the hash of the
527−parent blob, `p.q` is the `mark` of the parent blob, and `r` is the
528−delta.
524+`%delta` is the case where we define the data by a delta on other data. In
525+practice, the other data is always the previous commit, but nothing depends on
526+this. `p.q` is the `mark` of the parent blob, `q.q` is the hash of the parent
527+blob, and `r` is the delta.
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530−`%direct` is the case where we simply have the data directly. `p` is the hash of
531−the data, and `q` is the data itself. These almost always come from the creation
532−of a file.
529+`%direct` is the case where we simply have the data directly. `q` is the data.
530+These almost always come from the creation of a file.
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534532#### `++udon`, abstract delta
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