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1313<!-- content -->
1414 <h1 class="mb4 full mt4 f2 fw3 c4-10-lg">Introduction</h1>
1515 <section class="full-bleed full grid12">
16− <section id="introduction" class="c4-10-md c4-10-lg full lh-copy">
16+ <section id="introduction" class=" c4-10-lg full lh-copy">
1717 <figure class="mt0">
1818 <img src="../assets/intro/ship.svg" alt="A drawing of an Urbit ship." />
1919 </figure>
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2828 </ul>
2929 </section>
3030
31− <section id="what-is-urbit" class="c4-10-md c4-10-lg full mt6">
31+ <section id="what-is-urbit" class=" c4-10-lg full mt6">
3232 <p>So, what <em>is</em> an Urbit?</p>
3333
3434 <figure class="mt6 tc lh-copy">
3535 <img src="../assets/intro/social-software.svg" />
3636 <figcaption class="measure home tl mt5">
37− <h3 class="fw6 tc mb4"><span class="fl">1.</span>It's an unremarkable computer from scratch</h3>
38− Your Urbit is a purpose-built tool for your own social software, not MEGACORP social networking.
37+ Your Urbit is a purpose built tool for your own social software, not MEGACORP social networking.
3938 On Urbit, you run (or build) your own software to connect and communicate with your friends and family.
4039 </figcaption>
4140 </figure>
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4342 <figure class="tc mt6 lh-copy">
4443 <img src="../assets/intro/rock.svg" />
4544 <figcaption class="measure home tl mt5">
46− <h3 class="fw6 tc mb4"><span class="fl">2.</span>It's designed for permanence and durability</h3>
47− Your Urbit is a permanent and completely private archive.
48− Your Urbit can store all your data safely, privately, forever.
45+ Your Urbit is a permanent, private archive.
46+ Your Urbit can store all your data and digital assets safely, privately, forever.
4947 </figcaption>
5048 </figure>
5149
5250 <figure class="tc mt6 lh-copy">
5351 <img src="../assets/intro/yours-forever.svg" />
5452 <figcaption class="measure home tl mt5">
55− <h3 class="fw6 tc mb4"><span class="fl">3.</span>It's cryptographically yours</h3>
56− You own your Urbit like you own Bitcoin.
57− Each Urbit is a piece of a new global network that’s owned and controlled by its users.</figcaption>
53+ You own your Urbit like you own Bitcoin.
54+ Each Urbit is a piece of a new network that’s owned and controlled by its users.
55+ </figcaption>
5856 </figure>
57+ <p class="mt5 mb5">Nothing quite like this has ever been done before. There’s nothing else like it.</p>
5958 </section>
6059
61− <section id="megacorp" class="c4-10-md c4-10-lg full">
60+ <section id="megacorp" class=" c4-10-lg full">
6261 <p class="lh-copy">Today, technology controls us. Every MEGACORP has the same incentive:
6362 To keep us hooked on their platform.</p>
6463 <p class="lh-copy">We built Urbit so people can control their technology, shape their digital lives and freely build
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6867 </section>
6968 </section>
7069 <article class="mt4 mb6 full c4-10-lg">
71− <p class="mb6">Want to continue down this rabbit hole? If you’re new to Urbit
70+ <p class="mb5">Want to continue down this rabbit hole? If you’re new to Urbit
7271 and want to learn more, start from the beginning. If you’re technical, start
7372 with the technical overview.</p>
7473 <ul class="posts">