@@ -46,13 +46,11 @@ with the following commands:
49−<blockquote class="blockquote">
50−There is currently a bug where the `%argument` lines are
49+> There is currently a bug where the `%argument` lines are
51−printed *above* the line you entered, so your output may not
50+> printed *above* the line you entered, so your output may not
52−look exactly like this.
51+> look exactly like this.
53−`>=` means that a command was successfully received and
52+> `>=` means that a command was successfully received and
54−executed.
53+> executed.
57Most of the app code should be simple enough to guess its
55Most of the app code should be simple enough to guess its
58function. The important part of this code is the definition of
56function. The important part of this code is the definition of
@@ -62,10 +60,10 @@ Once an app starts, it's always running in the background and you
62interact with it by sending it messages. The most
60interact with it by sending it messages. The most
63straightforward way to do that is to poke it from the command
61straightforward way to do that is to poke it from the command
64line, which we we did with `:echo 5` (`:[app-name]
62line, which we we did with `:echo 5` (`:[app-name]
65−[argument(s)]).
63+[argument(s)]`).
67In this case, `++poke-noun` takes an argument `arg` and prints it
65In this case, `++poke-noun` takes an argument `arg` and prints it
68−out with `~&`. This is an unusual rune that formally "does
66+out with `~&` (sigpam). This is an unusual rune that formally "does
69nothing", but the interpreter detects it and printfs the first
67nothing", but the interpreter detects it and printfs the first
70child, before executing the second as if the first didn't exist.
68child, before executing the second as if the first didn't exist.
71This is a slightly hacky way of printing to the console, but
69This is a slightly hacky way of printing to the console, but
@@ -88,7 +86,7 @@ line).
88The second thing `++poke-noun` produces is our state. `+>.$`
86The second thing `++poke-noun` produces is our state. `+>.$`
89refers to a particular address in our subject where our formal
87refers to a particular address in our subject where our formal
90app state is stored. It'll become clear why this is later on,
88app state is stored. It'll become clear why this is later on,
91−but for now pretend that `+>.$` is a magic invocation that means
89+but for now pretend that `+>.$` is a magic incantation that means
92"app state".
90"app state".
94Let's look at another example (edit your code in `/app/examples/echo/hoon` to reflect the code below). Say we want to only accept a
92Let's look at another example (edit your code in `/app/examples/echo/hoon` to reflect the code below). Say we want to only accept a
@@ -122,10 +120,10 @@ have conversion routines to other marks, and some have diff,
122patch, and merge algorithms. None of these are required for a
120patch, and merge algorithms. None of these are required for a
123mark to exist, however.
121mark to exist, however.
125−`noun` and `atom` are two of dozens of predefined marks (that will
123+`noun` and `atom` are two predefined marks. In your `/mar`
126−already be in your `/mar` directory), and the
124+directory, there are already many more, and you may add more
127−user may add more at will. The type associated with `noun` is
125+at will. The type associated with `noun` is `*`, and the type
128−`*`, and the type associated with `atom` is `@`.
126+associated with `atom` is `@`.
130When we poke an app from anywhere, we do so with a mark that
128When we poke an app from anywhere, we do so with a mark that
131searches for the corresponding (`++poke-[mark]`) arm. Data
129searches for the corresponding (`++poke-[mark]`) arm. Data
@@ -147,7 +145,7 @@ gall: %square: no poke arm for noun
147> Recall the bug where `%square` may get printed above the input
145> Recall the bug where `%square` may get printed above the input
150−Marks are powerful, and they're the backbone of urbit's data
148+Marks are powerful, and they're the backbone of Urbit's data
151pipeline, so we'll be getting quite used to them.
149pipeline, so we'll be getting quite used to them.
153**Exercise**:
151**Exercise**:
@@ -155,7 +153,7 @@ pipeline, so we'll be getting quite used to them.
155- Write an app that computes fizzbuzz on its input (as in the
153- Write an app that computes fizzbuzz on its input (as in the
156 previous section).
154 previous section).
158−# Sending a message to another ship
156+# Sending a message to another urbit
160Let's write our first network message! Here's `/app/examples/pong.hoon`:
158Let's write our first network message! Here's `/app/examples/pong.hoon`:
@@ -192,8 +190,8 @@ Run it with these commands:
194Replace `~sampel-sipnym` with another urbit. The easiest thing to
192Replace `~sampel-sipnym` with another urbit. The easiest thing to
195−do is to start a moon, a sub-identity of your urbit. If you don't know how to start a moon, see [the user admin section](/docs/using/admin/) Don't
193+do is to start a moon, a sub-identity of your urbit. If you don't know how to start a moon, see [the user admin section](/docs/using/admin/). Don't
196−forget to start the `%examples-pong` app on that urbit too. You should
194+forget to start the `%examples-pong` app on that urbit, too. You should
197see, on the foreign urbit, this output:
195see, on the foreign urbit, this output:
@@ -201,11 +199,11 @@ see, on the foreign urbit, this output:
203Most of the code should be straightforward. In `++poke-atom`,
201Most of the code should be straightforward. In `++poke-atom`,
204−the only new thing is the expression `(@t arg)`. As we already
202+the only new thing is the expression `(@t arg)`, which is the type `@t` being called as a function with argument `arg`. As we already
205−know, `@t` is the type of "cord" text strings. In Hoon, when types are called as functions, they serve as a validator function (called a "clam" in hoon) -- that is, a function whose domain is all nouns and range is the given type.
203+know, `@t` is the type of "cord" text strings. In Hoon, when types are called as functions, they serve as a validator function called a "clam" -- that is, a function whose domain is all nouns, and range is the given type (in this case, `@t`).
207−In simpler terms, if a validator function is passed a value that
205+In simpler terms, if a clam is passed a value of its own
208−falls within its type, that value is produced. Otherwise, it
206+type, it produces that value. Otherwise, it
209produces the default value (aka the "bunt") of its type. Here we call
207produces the default value (aka the "bunt") of its type. Here we call
210this `@t` function on the argument. This coerces the argument
208this `@t` function on the argument. This coerces the argument
211to text, so that we can print it out prettily no matter what
209to text, so that we can print it out prettily no matter what
@@ -290,8 +288,8 @@ Of course, we have to push a new layer onto our duct
290before passing it along (or responding to it directly) anywhere. This
288before passing it along (or responding to it directly) anywhere. This
291layer can have any data we want in it, but we don't need anything
289layer can have any data we want in it, but we don't need anything
292specific here, so we just use the wire `/sending`
290specific here, so we just use the wire `/sending`
293−(`/elem1/elem2/elem n` is one syntax used to create `++path`s and
291+(`/elem1/elem2/elemN` is one syntax used to create `++path`s and
294−`++wire`s of n elements). If we were expecting a response (which
292+`++wire`s of N elements). If we were expecting a response (which
295we're not), it would come back along the `/sending` wire, meaning
293we're not), it would come back along the `/sending` wire, meaning
296that the path `/sending` will be passed back to the response
294that the path `/sending` will be passed back to the response
297handler as an argument. Although it's not required, it's
295handler as an argument. Although it's not required, it's
@@ -300,18 +298,16 @@ bug-handling purposes.
301##### Term (sys-call)
299##### Term (sys-call)
303−Looking back at the general form of a move, there is a
304−`term`--which is text composed lowercase ascii and `-`, and has
301+Each move also has a `term`, composed of lowercase ASCII and/or `-`.
305−the sign of `@tas`-- which in this case is `%poke`. This is the
302+This `term` has the sign `@tas`. In this case, out `term` is `%poke`,
306−name of the particular kind of move we're sending. If you think
303+which is the name of the particular kind of move we're sending.
307−of a move as a syscall (which you should), then this `term` is
304+You can always use `%poke` to message an app. Other common names
308−the name of the syscall. Common ones include: `%poke`, to
309−message an app; `%warp`, to read from the filesystem; `%wait`, to
305+include `%warp`, to read from the filesystem; `%wait`, to
310set a timer; and `%them`, to send an http request.
306set a timer; and `%them`, to send an http request.
312−The general form ends with `*` (a noun) since each type of move takes
308+The move ends with `*` (that is, any noun) since each type of move takes
313different data. In our case, a `%poke` move takes a target
309different data. In our case, a `%poke` move takes a target
314−(urbit and app) and marked data and pokes the arm of the
310+(urbit and app) and marked data, then pokes the arm of the
315corresponding mark on that app on that urbit
311corresponding mark on that app on that urbit
316with that data. `[to-urbit-address %pong]` is the target urbit and app,
312with that data. `[to-urbit-address %pong]` is the target urbit and app,
317`%atom` is the mark`, and `'howdy'` is the data.
313`%atom` is the mark`, and `'howdy'` is the data.
@@ -321,12 +317,10 @@ When arvo receives a `%poke` move, it calls the appropriate
321between apps on the same urbit as for sending messages between
317between apps on the same urbit as for sending messages between
322apps on different urbits.
318apps on different urbits.
324−<blockquote class="blockquote">
325−We said earlier that we're not expecting a response. This is
320+> We said earlier that we're not expecting a response. This is
326−not entirely true: the `++coup` is called when we receive
321+> not entirely true: the `++coup` is called when we receive
327−acknowledgment that the `++poke` was called. We don't do
322+> acknowledgment that the `++poke` was called. We don't do
328−anything with this information right now, but we could.
323+> anything with this information right now, but we could.
331**Exercises**:
325**Exercises**:
@@ -369,5 +363,6 @@ anything with this information right now, but we could.
372−- Put `even` and `odd` on two separate ships and pass the
366+- Put `even` and `odd` on two separate urbits and pass the
373− messages over the network.
367+ messages over the network. Post a link to a working solution
368+ in :talk to receive a cookie.