@@ -57,9 +57,10 @@ For planets, stars, and galaxies, your networking public key is configured on
5757the Ethereum blockchain using one of your Azimuth private keys - either the one
5858associated to the wallet which owns the ship, or the one which holds the
5959[management proxy](@/docs/glossary/proxies.md). This is typically accomplished
60−with Bridge. Your networking private key is a necessary input (the
61−[keyfile](@/docs/glossary/keyfile.md)) for the initial boot sequence of your
62−ship (sometime called its `%dawn`), and this is also provided by Bridge.
60+with Bridge. Your networking private key (in the
61+[keyfile](@/docs/glossary/keyfile.md)) is a necessary input for the initial boot
62+sequence of your ship (sometime called its `%dawn`), and this is also provided
63+by Bridge.
6364
6465Public keys for moons are not tracked on the blockchain; instead they are
6566tracked by their parent ship. The networking private key is generated by the
@@ -67,7 +68,7 @@ parent ship and injected into the `%dawn` sequence for the moon, and its public
6768key is stored by the parent in its Jael vane. Networking keys for moons may be
6869changed by the parent ship, but not by the moon itself.
6970
70−For comets, their 128-bit `@p` name is actually their networking public key, and
71+For comets, their 128-bit `@p` name is the hash of their networking public key, and
7172the "mining" process to generate a comet consists of guessing a private key for
7273which the associated public key for which the last two bytes of their `@p`
7374matches one of the stars on the comet sponsors list downloaded during boot.
@@ -104,8 +105,8 @@ are utilized by Ames. All cryptographic primitives are
104105cryptographic libraries.
105106
106107[Vere](@/docs/vere/_index.md) is Urbit's Nock runtime system, written in C. All
107−cryptographic functions implemented in Hoon are hinted to the interpreter use
108−the [jet system](@/docs/vere/jetting.md) to run standard vetted cryptographic
108+cryptographic functions implemented in Hoon are hinted to the interpreter,
109+causing it to utilize the [jet system](@/docs/vere/jetting.md) to run standard vetted cryptographic
109110libraries.
110111
111112[Azimuth](@/docs/azimuth/_index.md) is an Ethereum-based public key