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commit8bdb3fa63c0531e631d8ae50680da3507fcce284 authorGalen Wolfe-Pauly <galen@tlon.io> dateThu 19 Dec 2019, 11:15 (7 years ago) parent780c635
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1111{% block bodyclasses %}class="index"{% endblock bodyclasses %}
1212
13−{% block title %}
13+{% block title %}
1414 <meta name="og:title" content="{{ config.title }} - Your personal server">
1515 <title>{{ config.title }} - Your personal server</title>
1616{% endblock title %}
17−{% block description %}
17+{% block description %}
1818 <meta name="og:description" content="Urbit is a simple, durable system for running a personal server that you own 100% and forever.">
1919 <meta name="description" content="Urbit is a simple, durable system for running a personal server that you own 100% and forever.">
2020{% endblock description %}
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3232
3333 <div class="grid12 w-100 h-100">
3434 <div class="full c3-10-md c3-10-lg flex items-center align-center z10 white">
35− Urbit is a simple, durable system for running a personal server that you
36− own 100% and forever.
35+ Urbit is a clean-slate OS and network for the 21st century.
3736 </div>
3837 </div>
3938 <!-- VIMEO VERSION KEPT AS SHIM -->
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4645
4746<section class="full lh-copy c2-7-md c3-7-lg mt4">
4847 <p class="mb4">
49− Urbit is two new pieces of technology:</br>
50− Urbit OS and Urbit ID.
48+ Urbit is two new pieces of technology:<br/>
49+ Urbit OS + Urbit ID.
5150 </p>
52− <p><strong>Urbit OS</strong> is a clean-slate reimagining of what an operating system should be. It runs on any Unix machine with an internet connection. Urbit OS is a VM, a programming language and a set of kernel modules designed for an individual to run a permanent personal server on the network.</p>
53− <p><strong>Urbit ID</strong> is a PKI designed as an authentication system for Urbit OS. Your
54− Urbit ID is a combined username, network address and crypto wallet.</p>
55− <p>Urbit OS and Urbit ID are designed to work together as a single system, but
56− each can be used individually. Both are completely <a href="https://github.com/urbit/urbit">open source</a> and free for
57− anyone to build on top of.</p>
51+ <p><strong>Urbit OS</strong> is a clean slate reimaginging of the operating system as an 'overlay OS'. It runs on any Unix machine with an internet connection. Urbit OS is a compact system for an individual to run their own permanent personal server.</p>
52+ <p><strong>Urbit ID</strong> is a decentralized digital identity system. Your
53+ Urbit ID is a username, network address and crypto wallet designed for Urbit OS.</p>
54+ <p>Urbit OS + Urbit ID are designed to work together as a single system. Both are completely <a class="bb" href="https://github.com/urbit/urbit">open source</a> for anyone to build on top of, play with and experiment with.</p>
55+ <p>Urbit is <i>not quite</i> ready for everyday users. But if you're curious, keep going ↓</p>
5856</section>
5957
6058<section class="full c2-7-md c3-7-lg mt5">
6159 <ul class="list">
62− <li>
63− <a class="green2" href="/using/install">Install OS1 locally</a>
64− </li>
60+ <li>
61+ <a class="green2" href="/understanding-urbit">Understanding Urbit</a>
62+ </li>
63+ <li class="mt3">
64+ <a href="/using/install">Install Urbit OS 0</a>
65+ </li>
6566 <li class="mt3">
66− <a class="blue2" href="/docs">Read about Urbit's stack</a>
67+ <a class="blue2" href="/docs">Docs + Developer Resources</a>
6768 </li>
6869 </ul>
6970</section>