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Merge pull request #184 from urbit/intro-edit-slim

Edited the intro copy and tighted the vertical spacing

commitb1f1d7173bcf8c62c98087525776792dc867baa6 authorMatilde Park <matilde@tlon.io> dateWed 9 Oct 2019, 13:50 (7 years ago) parentcb78acf7302b90
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templates/understanding-urbit/list.html+16−23
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33{% block content %}
44<!-- header -->
55<nav class="mt4 full fourth-1-lg mb3 mb0-m mb0-l mb0-xl absolute-xl">
6− <a class="gray3" href="/">Urbit</a>
6+ <a class="gray3" href="/">Urbit</a>
77 <span class="gray3"> / </span>
88 <a href="/understanding-urbit/">
99 Understanding Urbit
@@ -22,46 +22,39 @@
2222 <figure class="mt0">
2323 <img src="../assets/intro/ship.svg" alt="A drawing of an Urbit ship." />
2424 </figure>
25−
25+
2626 <p class="mb0 lh-copy">This is a drawing of an Urbit.</p>
2727 <p class="mt0 lh-copy">It’s a new kind of computer.</p>
28− <p class="mt6 lh-copy">This image is representative of three key (yet familiar) aspects to this new kind of computer:</p>
29− <ul class="list">
30− <li class="mt4 ml0">The <img src="../assets/intro/apps.svg" /> apps you use every day,</li>
31− <li class="mt4 ml0">the <img src="../assets/intro/arvo.svg" /> OS that makes sure everything runs smoothly,</li>
32− <li class="mt4 ml0">and your <img src="../assets/intro/id.svg" /> identity at the center of it all.</li>
33− </ul>
3428 </section>
35−
36− <section id="what-is-urbit" class=" c4-10-lg full mt6">
37− <p>So, what <em>is</em> an Urbit?</p>
38−
29+
30+ <section id="what-is-urbit" class=" c4-10-lg full">
31+
3932 <figure class="mt6 tc lh-copy">
4033 <img src="../assets/intro/social-software.svg" />
4134 <figcaption class="measure home tl mt5">
42− Your Urbit is a purpose built tool for your own social software, not MEGACORP social networking.
43− On Urbit, you run (or build) your own software to connect and communicate with your friends and family.
35+ Your Urbit is a purpose built tool for your own social software, not MEGACORP social networking.
36+ On Urbit, you run (or build) your own software to connect and communicate with your friends and family.
4437 </figcaption>
4538 </figure>
46−
39+
4740 <figure class="tc mt6 lh-copy">
4841 <img src="../assets/intro/rock.svg" />
4942 <figcaption class="measure home tl mt5">
50− Your Urbit is a permanent, private archive.
43+ Your Urbit is a permanent, private archive.
5144 Your Urbit can store all your data and digital assets safely, privately, forever.
5245 </figcaption>
5346 </figure>
54−
47+
5548 <figure class="tc mt6 lh-copy">
5649 <img src="../assets/intro/yours-forever.svg" />
5750 <figcaption class="measure home tl mt5">
58− You own your Urbit like you own Bitcoin.
51+ You own your Urbit like you own Bitcoin.
5952 Each Urbit is a piece of a new network that’s owned and controlled by its users.
6053 </figcaption>
6154 </figure>
6255 <p class="mt6 mb6">Nothing quite like this has ever been done before. There’s nothing else like it.</p>
6356 </section>
64−
57+
6558 <section id="megacorp" class="c4-10-lg full">
6659 <img class="db" src="https://media.urbit.org/site/understanding-urbit/urbit-id/urbit-id-1.svg" style="margin: 2rem auto 4rem auto;"/>
6760 <p class="lh-copy">Today, technology controls us. Every MEGACORP has the same incentive:
@@ -70,12 +63,12 @@
7063 their digital communities.</p>
7164 <p class="lh-copy">We want to replace the internet with a foundation for computing that we can all rely on far into the future.</p>
7265 <p class="lh-copy">Urbit is a large, ambitious project. But at the core it’s durable, simple and yours.</p>
73− </section>
66+ </section>
7467 </section>
7568 <article class="mt4 mb6 full c4-10-lg">
76− <p class="mb5">Want to continue down this rabbit hole? If you’re new to Urbit
77− and want to learn more, start from the beginning. If you’re technical, start
78− with the technical overview.</p>
69+ <p class="mb5">Want to continue down this rabbit hole? If you’re new to Urbit
70+ and want to learn more, start from the beginning. If you’re technical, start
71+ with the technical overview.</p>
7972 <ul class="posts">
8073 {% set posts = get_section(path="understanding-urbit/_index.md") %}
8174 {% for page in posts.pages %}