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99# Hall interface
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11−This document describes the different interfaces Hall provides and the data that is accessible and modifyable through them. Knowledge of the Urbit application model (including [new gall](new-gall)) and [Hall's architecture](architecture) is assumed.
11+This document describes the different interfaces Hall provides and the data that is accessible and modifiable through them. Knowledge of the Urbit application model (including [new gall](new-gall)) and [Hall's architecture](architecture) is assumed.
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1313While the structures here are given in Hoon, they match fairly closely to their JSON equivalent. Most important to note is that `$%({$x y/z})` becomes accessible as `json.x.y`.
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180180### /circle
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182−Circle queries allow for the retrieving of data from stories. Their messages, configuration, presences, can all be accessed. Since this is a lot of data, there are lots of possibilities for filtering it built in to the query itself.
182+Circle queries allow for the retrieving of data from stories. Their messages, configuration, and presences can all be accessed. Since this is a lot of data, there are lots of possibilities for filtering it built in to the query itself.
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184−A quick refresher on the difference between "local" and "remote" presence and configuration: "local" means it pertains to the circle itself, "remote" means it pertains to one of its configured sources. The latter is primarily useful to clients when using a circle for aggregation, like the `%inbox`.
184+A quick refresher on the difference between "local" and "remote" presence and configuration: "local" means it pertains to the circle itself; "remote" means it pertains to one of its configured sources. The latter is primarily useful to clients when using a circle for aggregation, like the `%inbox`.
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186186```
187187++ query ::
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246246#### /circle prize
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248−Contains (where applicable) messages in envelopes (with message numbers), local and remote configurations and presences.
248+Contains (where applicable) messages in envelopes (with message numbers), as well as local and remote configurations and presences.
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250250```
251251++ prize :> query result
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380−`%glyph`: Adds or removed a binding of a glyph to an audience.
380+`%glyph`: Adds or removes a binding of a glyph to an audience.
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382382`%nick`: Sets a local nickname for a ship. An empty nickname `''` means the ship has no nickname.
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