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Merge pull request #268 from urbit/mino-copy-edits

Mino copy edits

commit8d1d368de59c9f03a07a0ebdb23fb2fd1c699add authorAnthony Arroyo <anthony@tlon.io> dateFri 6 Sep 2019, 13:33 (7 years ago) parent2059fcc770307f
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src/views/Activate/ActivateCode.js+5−2 src/views/Activate/PassportDownload.js+3−7 src/views/Activate/PassportVerify.js+8−4
src/views/Activate/ActivateCode.js+5−2
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
11import React, { useCallback, useMemo, useRef } from 'react';
22import { Just } from 'folktale/maybe';
33import * as azimuth from 'azimuth-js';
4−import { Grid, H4, CheckboxInput } from 'indigo-react';
4+import { Grid, H4, P, CheckboxInput } from 'indigo-react';
55import { FORM_ERROR } from 'final-form';
66
77import View from 'components/View';
@@ -147,9 +147,12 @@ export default function ActivateCode() {
147147 <View inset>
148148 <Grid>
149149 <Grid.Item full as={Passport} point={derivedPoint} />
150− <Grid.Item full as={H4} className="mt3 mb2">
150+ <Grid.Item full as={H4} className="mt3">
151151 Activate
152152 </Grid.Item>
153+ <Grid.Item full as={P} className="mb2">
154+ Someone has invited you to claim your Urbit identity and join the network. Enter your activation code to continue.
155+ </Grid.Item>
153156 <BridgeForm
154157 validate={validate}
155158 onSubmit={onSubmit}
src/views/Activate/PassportDownload.js+3−7
@@ -52,18 +52,14 @@ export default function PassportDownload({ className }) {
5252
5353 return (
5454 <>
55− <PassportView className={className} header="Passport" step={1}>
55+ <PassportView className={className} header="Download Your Urbit Passport" step={1}>
5656 <Grid>
5757 <Grid.Item full>
5858 <P>
59− After you’ve downloaded your passport, back up the ticket manually
60− or store on a trusted device.
59+ Your Passport includes your Master Ticket, a password giving you total control of your Urbit identity. You’ll need it to access the network and manage your identity.
6160 </P>
6261 <P>
63− What is digital identity? A passport is your digital identity. You
64− will use your passport to access your true computer, send
65− payments, and administer your identity. So naturally, you must
66− keep this secure.
62+ After your Passport is downloaded, make sure to print it out on paper and store it somewhere safe.
6763 </P>
6864 </Grid.Item>
6965 <Grid.Item
src/views/Activate/PassportVerify.js+8−4
@@ -47,12 +47,16 @@ export default function PassportVerify({ className }) {
4747 );
4848
4949 return (
50− <PassportView header="Verify Passport" step={2} className={className}>
50+ <PassportView header="Verify Your Master Ticket" step={2} className={className}>
5151 <Grid>
5252 <Grid.Item full as={P}>
53− After you download your passport, verify your custody. Your passport
54− should be a folder of image files. One of them is your Master Ticket.
55− Open it and enter the 4 word phrase below (with hyphens).
53+ We need to verify that you’re you. Unzip the file you downloaded in the previous step. It should yield a directory of images.
54+ </Grid.Item>
55+ <Grid.Item full as={P}>
56+ One of the images includes your Master Ticket. It’s a four-word phrase separated with hyphens. Enter it below to verify you recieved it (include the hyphens).
57+ </Grid.Item>
58+ <Grid.Item full as={P}>
59+ <b>Never share your Master Ticket with anyone else.</b>
5660 </Grid.Item>
5761 <BridgeForm
5862 validate={validate}