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Merge pull request #268 from urbit/mino-copy-edits
8d1d368Anthony Arroyo
src/views/Activate/ActivateCode.js+5−2
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@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
1import React, { useCallback, useMemo, useRef } from 'react';
1import React, { useCallback, useMemo, useRef } from 'react';
2import { Just } from 'folktale/maybe';
2import { Just } from 'folktale/maybe';
3import * as azimuth from 'azimuth-js';
3import * as azimuth from 'azimuth-js';
4−import { Grid, H4, CheckboxInput } from 'indigo-react';
4+import { Grid, H4, P, CheckboxInput } from 'indigo-react';
5import { FORM_ERROR } from 'final-form';
5import { FORM_ERROR } from 'final-form';
6
6
7import View from 'components/View';
7import View from 'components/View';
@@ -147,9 +147,12 @@ export default function ActivateCode() {
147 <View inset>
147 <View inset>
148 <Grid>
148 <Grid>
149 <Grid.Item full as={Passport} point={derivedPoint} />
149 <Grid.Item full as={Passport} point={derivedPoint} />
150− <Grid.Item full as={H4} className="mt3 mb2">
150+ <Grid.Item full as={H4} className="mt3">
151 Activate
151 Activate
152 </Grid.Item>
152 </Grid.Item>
153+ <Grid.Item full as={P} className="mb2">
154+ Someone has invited you to claim your Urbit identity and join the network. Enter your activation code to continue.
155+ </Grid.Item>
153 <BridgeForm
156 <BridgeForm
154 validate={validate}
157 validate={validate}
155 onSubmit={onSubmit}
158 onSubmit={onSubmit}
src/views/Activate/PassportDownload.js+3−7
@@ -52,18 +52,14 @@ export default function PassportDownload({ className }) {
52
52
53 return (
53 return (
54 <>
54 <>
55− <PassportView className={className} header="Passport" step={1}>
55+ <PassportView className={className} header="Download Your Urbit Passport" step={1}>
56 <Grid>
56 <Grid>
57 <Grid.Item full>
57 <Grid.Item full>
58 <P>
58 <P>
59− After you’ve downloaded your passport, back up the ticket manually
59+ Your Passport includes your Master Ticket, a password giving you total control of your Urbit identity. You’ll need it to access the network and manage your identity.
60− or store on a trusted device.
61 </P>
60 </P>
62 <P>
61 <P>
63− What is digital identity? A passport is your digital identity. You
62+ After your Passport is downloaded, make sure to print it out on paper and store it somewhere safe.
64− will use your passport to access your true computer, send
65− payments, and administer your identity. So naturally, you must
66− keep this secure.
67 </P>
63 </P>
68 </Grid.Item>
64 </Grid.Item>
69 <Grid.Item
65 <Grid.Item
src/views/Activate/PassportVerify.js+8−4
@@ -47,12 +47,16 @@ export default function PassportVerify({ className }) {
47 );
47 );
48
48
49 return (
49 return (
50− <PassportView header="Verify Passport" step={2} className={className}>
50+ <PassportView header="Verify Your Master Ticket" step={2} className={className}>
51 <Grid>
51 <Grid>
52 <Grid.Item full as={P}>
52 <Grid.Item full as={P}>
53− After you download your passport, verify your custody. Your passport
53+ We need to verify that you’re you. Unzip the file you downloaded in the previous step. It should yield a directory of images.
54− should be a folder of image files. One of them is your Master Ticket.
54+ </Grid.Item>
55− Open it and enter the 4 word phrase below (with hyphens).
55+ <Grid.Item full as={P}>
56+ One of the images includes your Master Ticket. It’s a four-word phrase separated with hyphens. Enter it below to verify you recieved it (include the hyphens).
57+ </Grid.Item>
58+ <Grid.Item full as={P}>
59+ <b>Never share your Master Ticket with anyone else.</b>
56 </Grid.Item>
60 </Grid.Item>
57 <BridgeForm
61 <BridgeForm
58 validate={validate}
62 validate={validate}