@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Stars and galaxies are network infrastructure.
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4646Each planet or star is launched by its "parent," the star or galaxy
4747whose number is its bottom half. So the planet `~firbyr-napbes`,
48−`0xdeadbeef` or `3.735.928.559`, is the child of `~pollev`, `0xbeef`
48+`0xdead.beef` or `3.735.928.559`, is the child of `~pollev`, `0xbeef`
4949or `48.879`, whose parent is `~mun`, `0xef`, `239`. The parent of
5050`~mun` and all galaxies is `~zod`, `0`.
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@@ -65,8 +65,8 @@ your name. In the packet layer, your ship is your network address.
6565In the PKI, your ship is your cryptographic identity. Perhaps more
6666intuitively, a ship is a sort of pronounceable phone number.
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68−And once Urbit is built, no one owns it. No one can control it. It
69−does need governance; it governs itself, as a digital republic.
68+And once Urbit is built, no one owns the city. No one can control it.
69+It does need governance; but it governs itself as a digital republic.
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