@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Stars and galaxies are network infrastructure.
46Each planet or star is launched by its "parent," the star or galaxy
46Each planet or star is launched by its "parent," the star or galaxy
47whose number is its bottom half. So the planet `~firbyr-napbes`,
47whose number is its bottom half. So the planet `~firbyr-napbes`,
48−`0xdeadbeef` or `3.735.928.559`, is the child of `~pollev`, `0xbeef`
48+`0xdead.beef` or `3.735.928.559`, is the child of `~pollev`, `0xbeef`
49or `48.879`, whose parent is `~mun`, `0xef`, `239`. The parent of
49or `48.879`, whose parent is `~mun`, `0xef`, `239`. The parent of
50`~mun` and all galaxies is `~zod`, `0`.
50`~mun` and all galaxies is `~zod`, `0`.
@@ -65,8 +65,8 @@ your name. In the packet layer, your ship is your network address.
65In the PKI, your ship is your cryptographic identity. Perhaps more
65In the PKI, your ship is your cryptographic identity. Perhaps more
66intuitively, a ship is a sort of pronounceable phone number.
66intuitively, a ship is a sort of pronounceable phone number.
68−And once Urbit is built, no one owns it. No one can control it. It
68+And once Urbit is built, no one owns the city. No one can control it.
69−does need governance; it governs itself, as a digital republic.
69+It does need governance; but it governs itself as a digital republic.