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1818Open platforms don’t beat closed systems just because they’re open.
1919They win because you can do more exciting things with them. We
2020believe we’re overdue for new infrastructure not purely on principle:
21−but because we think you can build better products on top. Urbit will
22−always be a platform for others to invent on top of. We hope to drive
23−much of that momentum ourselves.
21+but because we think you can build better products on top.
2422
25−We look forward to a future where your fleet of Urbits run throughout
26−your house, keep your biometric data in sync with the data center and
27−keep your medical and financial data secure. Today Urbit is just a
28−proof of concept — but we see a road from here to there.
23+We look forward to a future where your fleet of Urbits run the devices
24+throughout your house, keep your biometric data in sync with the data
25+center and hold your secure medical and financial data. Today Urbit
26+is just a proof of concept — but we see a road from here to there.
2927
3028## Today
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109107is very simple and lends itself well to auditing. This makes it a
110108very blockchain-friendly platform.
111109
112−(Could add something about IPFS here)
113−
114110## Over the horizon
115111
116112If there’s one thing we know from the history of personal computers