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18Open platforms don’t beat closed systems just because they’re open.
18Open platforms don’t beat closed systems just because they’re open.
19They win because you can do more exciting things with them. We
19They win because you can do more exciting things with them. We
20believe we’re overdue for new infrastructure not purely on principle:
20believe we’re overdue for new infrastructure not purely on principle:
21−but because we think you can build better products on top. Urbit will
21+but because we think you can build better products on top.
22−always be a platform for others to invent on top of. We hope to drive
23−much of that momentum ourselves.
25−We look forward to a future where your fleet of Urbits run throughout
23+We look forward to a future where your fleet of Urbits run the devices
26−your house, keep your biometric data in sync with the data center and
24+throughout your house, keep your biometric data in sync with the data
27−keep your medical and financial data secure. Today Urbit is just a
25+center and hold your secure medical and financial data. Today Urbit
28−proof of concept — but we see a road from here to there.
26+is just a proof of concept — but we see a road from here to there.
@@ -109,8 +107,6 @@ provide any kind of distributed consensus, but our computation model
109is very simple and lends itself well to auditing. This makes it a
107is very simple and lends itself well to auditing. This makes it a
110very blockchain-friendly platform.
108very blockchain-friendly platform.
112−(Could add something about IPFS here)
114## Over the horizon
110## Over the horizon
116If there’s one thing we know from the history of personal computers
112If there’s one thing we know from the history of personal computers