@@ -94,13 +94,13 @@ seed is also useful to perform everyday operations (such as boot your ship!).
9494
9595Select the appropriate option and click `Continue ->`.
9696
97−If you already have a point, (for example, if you are trying to boot a ship
98−from a pre-etherium era network) you should see a list of points associated with your
97+If you already have a point -- for example, if you are trying to boot a ship```
98+from a pre-Ethereum-era network -- you should see a list of points associated with your
9999keys. If you are trying to boot a planet for the first time, click on the
100−details link for that point. At the bottom on the details page there is
101−a section called `Urbit Networking` if this section is filled out, proceed to step 6.
100+`Details` link for that point. At the bottom on the Details page, there is
101+a section called `Urbit Networking`. If the fields in this section are filled out, proceed to step 6.
102102
103−If you do not have a point and are getting one sent to you, proceed to step 4.
103+If you do not yet have a point and are getting one sent to you, proceed to step 4.
104104
105105#### Step 4: Accept Your Transfer
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@@ -125,8 +125,8 @@ network seed and derive a new keyfile. See our
125125[HD Wallet Spec](https://github.com/urbit/proposals/blob/master/8.udon)
126126for more information.
127127
128−It should be noted that this is an event on the etherium network and will cost
129−(generally) a trivial amount of gas to complete.
128+It should be noted that this is an event on the Ethereum network and will cost
129+ a trivial, but non-zero, amount of [gas](https://github.com/ethereum/wiki/wiki/Design-Rationale#gas-and-fees) to complete.
130130
131131#### Step 6: Generate Your Keyfile
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