@@ -94,13 +94,13 @@ seed is also useful to perform everyday operations (such as boot your ship!).
95Select the appropriate option and click `Continue ->`.
95Select the appropriate option and click `Continue ->`.
97−If you already have a point, (for example, if you are trying to boot a ship
97+If you already have a point -- for example, if you are trying to boot a ship```
98−from a pre-etherium era network) you should see a list of points associated with your
98+from a pre-Ethereum-era network -- you should see a list of points associated with your
99keys. If you are trying to boot a planet for the first time, click on the
99keys. If you are trying to boot a planet for the first time, click on the
100−details link for that point. At the bottom on the details page there is
100+`Details` link for that point. At the bottom on the Details page, there is
101−a section called `Urbit Networking` if this section is filled out, proceed to step 6.
101+a section called `Urbit Networking`. If the fields in this section are filled out, proceed to step 6.
103−If you do not have a point and are getting one sent to you, proceed to step 4.
103+If you do not yet have a point and are getting one sent to you, proceed to step 4.
105#### Step 4: Accept Your Transfer
105#### Step 4: Accept Your Transfer
@@ -125,8 +125,8 @@ network seed and derive a new keyfile. See our
125[HD Wallet Spec](https://github.com/urbit/proposals/blob/master/8.udon)
125[HD Wallet Spec](https://github.com/urbit/proposals/blob/master/8.udon)
126for more information.
126for more information.
128−It should be noted that this is an event on the etherium network and will cost
128+It should be noted that this is an event on the Ethereum network and will cost
129−(generally) a trivial amount of gas to complete.
129+ a trivial, but non-zero, amount of [gas](https://github.com/ethereum/wiki/wiki/Design-Rationale#gas-and-fees) to complete.
131#### Step 6: Generate Your Keyfile
131#### Step 6: Generate Your Keyfile