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commitf16e532404e87b75dc0f54348d19910f36385187 authorjoshuareagan <josh@tlon.io> dateWed 17 Oct 2018, 10:08 (8 years ago) parent59c5929
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docs/reference/rune/mic/lus.udon+3−3 docs/reference/rune/mic/tar.udon+2−2 docs/reference/rune/mic/tis.udon+2−2
docs/reference/rune/mic/lus.udon+3−3
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1212## Produces
1313
14−A noun that can be rendered as single XML node.
14+A noun that represents a single XML node.
1515
1616## Syntax
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2626## Discussion
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28−This is a Sail rune. Sail is a part of Hoon used for generating a static website using the appropriate render pipeline. See the [Sail tutorial](../../../../tutorial/sail).
28+This is a Sail rune. Sail is a part of Hoon used for creating and operating on nouns that represent XML nodes. Among other things it can be used to generate a static website using the appropriate render pipeline. See the [Sail tutorial](../../../../tutorial/sail).
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3030In Sail you can produce a single `<p>` node very simply in the following way:
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3434[[%p ~] [[%$ [%$ "This will be rendered as an XML node."] ~] ~] ~]
3535```
3636
37−One thing that is interesting about Sail is how you can use arbitrary Hoon expressions to choose from among several nodes to render. This is done with the `;+` rune.
37+One interesting thing about Sail is that it allows you to use complex Hoon expressions to choose from among several nodes to render. This is done with the `;+` rune.
3838
3939## Examples
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docs/reference/rune/mic/tar.udon+2−2
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ make a list of XML nodes from a tuple (Sail)
1111
1212## Produces
1313
14−A list of nouns, each of which can be rendered as an XML node.
14+A list of nouns, each of which represents an XML node.
1515
1616## Syntax
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2525
2626## Discussion
2727
28−This is a Sail rune. Sail is a part of Hoon used for generating a static website using the appropriate render pipeline. See the [Sail tutorial](../../../../tutorial/sail).
28+This is a Sail rune. Sail is a part of Hoon used for creating and operating on nouns that represent XML nodes. Among other things it can be used to generate a static website using the appropriate render pipeline. See the [Sail tutorial](../../../../tutorial/sail).
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3030In Sail you can produce a single `<p>` node very simply in the following way:
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docs/reference/rune/mic/tis.udon+2−2
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ make a tuple of XML nodes (Sail)
1111
1212## Produces
1313
14−A tuple of nouns, each of which can be rendered as an XML node.
14+A tuple of nouns, each of which represents an XML node.
1515
1616## Syntax
1717
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ A tuple of nouns, each of which can be rendered as an XML node.
2525
2626## Discussion
2727
28−This is a Sail rune. Sail is a part of Hoon used for generating a static website using the appropriate render pipeline. See the [Sail tutorial](../../../../tutorial/sail).
28+This is a Sail rune. Sail is a part of Hoon used for creating and operating on nouns that represent XML nodes. Among other things it can be used to generate a static website using the appropriate render pipeline. See the [Sail tutorial](../../../../tutorial/sail).
2929
3030In Sail you can produce a single `<p>` node very simply in the following way:
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