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12## Produces
12## Produces
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14−A noun that can be rendered as single XML node.
14+A noun that represents a single XML node.
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16## Syntax
16## Syntax
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26## Discussion
26## Discussion
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28−This is a Sail rune. Sail is a part of Hoon used for generating a static website using the appropriate render pipeline. See the [Sail tutorial](../../../../tutorial/sail).
28+This is a Sail rune. Sail is a part of Hoon used for creating and operating on nouns that represent XML nodes. Among other things it can be used to generate a static website using the appropriate render pipeline. See the [Sail tutorial](../../../../tutorial/sail).
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30In Sail you can produce a single `<p>` node very simply in the following way:
30In Sail you can produce a single `<p>` node very simply in the following way:
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34[[%p ~] [[%$ [%$ "This will be rendered as an XML node."] ~] ~] ~]
34[[%p ~] [[%$ [%$ "This will be rendered as an XML node."] ~] ~] ~]
35```
35```
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37−One thing that is interesting about Sail is how you can use arbitrary Hoon expressions to choose from among several nodes to render. This is done with the `;+` rune.
37+One interesting thing about Sail is that it allows you to use complex Hoon expressions to choose from among several nodes to render. This is done with the `;+` rune.
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39## Examples
39## Examples
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docs/reference/rune/mic/tar.udon+2−2
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12## Produces
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14−A list of nouns, each of which can be rendered as an XML node.
14+A list of nouns, each of which represents an XML node.
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16## Syntax
16## Syntax
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26## Discussion
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28−This is a Sail rune. Sail is a part of Hoon used for generating a static website using the appropriate render pipeline. See the [Sail tutorial](../../../../tutorial/sail).
28+This is a Sail rune. Sail is a part of Hoon used for creating and operating on nouns that represent XML nodes. Among other things it can be used to generate a static website using the appropriate render pipeline. See the [Sail tutorial](../../../../tutorial/sail).
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30In Sail you can produce a single `<p>` node very simply in the following way:
30In Sail you can produce a single `<p>` node very simply in the following way:
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docs/reference/rune/mic/tis.udon+2−2
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12## Produces
12## Produces
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14−A tuple of nouns, each of which can be rendered as an XML node.
14+A tuple of nouns, each of which represents an XML node.
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16## Syntax
16## Syntax
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26## Discussion
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28−This is a Sail rune. Sail is a part of Hoon used for generating a static website using the appropriate render pipeline. See the [Sail tutorial](../../../../tutorial/sail).
28+This is a Sail rune. Sail is a part of Hoon used for creating and operating on nouns that represent XML nodes. Among other things it can be used to generate a static website using the appropriate render pipeline. See the [Sail tutorial](../../../../tutorial/sail).
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30In Sail you can produce a single `<p>` node very simply in the following way:
30In Sail you can produce a single `<p>` node very simply in the following way:
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